Wednesday, April 14, 2010

Chapter 1:

Rainkit walked around to the medicine cat den. "Mouseheart!" He yelled. Mouseheart looked over from laying down. "Welcome back Rainkit." She smiled at him."Lightstream said to say thank you for the berry's!" Rainkit padded around to Mouseheart. "Of course Rainkit.Have you heard?They say that Reedstar is going to make you an apprentice soon!" Mouseheart smiled. "I have!! I'm totally excited!" Rainkit quivered with excitement but calmed down very soon. Mouseheart smiled at Rainkit warmly. Eaglefang walked into the medicine cat den and looked at Rainkit, than at Mouseheart. "Reedstar needs to make Rainkit an apprentice, You can't steal him for today Mouseheart." Eaglefang looked at Mouseheart with a mean look in his eyes. Rainkit was shocked at Eaglefang's rudeness. "Very well Eaglefang.. But you should learn how to control your manners." Mouseheart looked Eaglefang in the eye, her blue eyes showing angry, and mixed feelings. "Rainkit, come with me and we'll go to the High rocks to make you an apprentice." Mouseheart said to Rainkit sweetly. Rainkit nodded and ran outside waiting at the entrance of the medicine cat den. Mouseheart nodded for him to go ahead, and he did. "Don't think I don't know what you did Mouseheart." Eaglefang shot Mouseheart a look. "I fully understand my fault.. But it has always shown my true feelings for Reedstar." Mouseheart shot a look back at Eaglefang, filled with anger, but also a little sadness. Eaglefang was taken aback. Before he said more, Mouseheart had padded out and was watching Rainkit and Reedstar get ready. When Reedstar jumped onto the high rock, Rainkit followed, behind him. Reedstar looked at Mouseheart and nodded his head, a small nod, barley you could see it.

"May all cats of SquirrelClan gather!" But, he didn't even have to say a word. The clan had already gathered and was getting excited. "I would like to make Rainkit an apprentice!"
Reedstar continued, "Rainkit! Do you promise to uphold the warrior code with your life?" Rainkit urgently nodded his head in excitement. "Then I call upon my ancestors to watch over this apprentice with guidance! Rainkit, you are now Rainpaw! You are patient,and a very quick learner, I want someone who is strong and worthy of such patients! Goldenfrost shall be your mentor!" The clan cheered, but Mouseheart just looked at Rainkit warmly and smiled. Goldenfrost nodded and touched noses with Rainpaw,Rainpaw's eyes were showing great happiness.

4 comments:

  1. GO MOUSEHEART~!
    Loved the part when she says:

    "I fully understand my fault.. But it has always shown my true feelings for Reedstar." Mouseheart shot a look back at Eaglefang, filled with anger, but also a little sadness.

    BEST PART EVER!

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  2. I agree with Moondance!!!

    ~LOVED IT~~

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  3. AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  4. Thanx guys! The next chapter is a little long, so it may take a week or so, unless i stay up until 10..... lol! It'll be coming soon! I promise!

    ~Raintalon

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